UPDATE: Soundtrack Third Draft

Today I received another draft from Alex. He said in his email that he changed the montage so it starts sooner but had to remove the piano note and replaced it with a different sound effect. He also fixed up our background noise in the scenes with dialogue so it sounds much better, and adjusted the volumes of the dialogue and voice-over so we can hear them more clearly. Below is the draft:

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79C_63O1-DA&feature=youtu.be)

Overall, Tia and I are very happy with this. We think the montage sounds a lot more punch-y and effective, the volumes of the voice-over and dialogue all seem to be correct and easy to understand, and it has generally improved the tone of our trailer. I told Alex this and that we have no further comments to make and so all that remains is for him to master the soundtrack and polish it up in any way he sees fit. We should have a final copy by early next week.